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Discussion in 'Photography, Artwork & Videos' started by Adjecyca, Feb 21, 2013.

  1. Adjecyca

    Adjecyca Pup

    Sometimes i feel like my drawings are getting worse and worse... But there's been other times i've felt that way and than i've drawn something i was actually proud of... I think this one is good enough to post..But i am disappointed in it
    Sometimes i feel like my drawings are getting worse and worse... But there's been other times i've felt that way and than i've drawn something i was actually proud of... I think this one is good enough to post..But i am disappointed in it
    [img]http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8100/8494010764_f13a079778_c.jpg
     
  2. 99Formula

    99Formula Pup

    Very nice!

    Just my opinion, as I can't draw to save my life anyhow, but from my stand point, I only see the following small flaws:

    1.) the front of the lower jaw. It kind of looks like there are two jaw lines or something
    2.) The top of the back side of the shoulder line looks a little high..

    Other than that, I think you did an amazing job! I sure as hell wish that I could draw something more than stick men.

    Keep it up! You should also post some of your prior work! I'm always a fan of any drawing.:)
     
  3. toom

    toom Big Dog

    AWESOME that can't be an easy task..!
     
  4. babedulce

    babedulce Big Dog

    some constructive criticism.

    Work on your perspective. If you look at the head the nose isnt looking right then the neck is too short for the difference in orientation between the head and the rest of the body.

    Work on your shading. The rough tones of your shading makes the drawing look like a sketch. If you are trying to give the impression of a more refined drawing, start by lightly shading the body then finely work yourself through all the tones to give a more refined impression.
     
  5. BLUE8BULL

    BLUE8BULL CH Dog

    You have some-thing.....i would def keep at it,,,not bad,,better than most.
     
  6. amistad

    amistad Big Dog

    It look's good you can tell what breed of dog it is, alittle more practice and it will look even better keep it up.
     
  7. Adjecyca

    Adjecyca Pup

    it actually is meant to be more of a sketch, i can and have done better shading, but recently have only been doing sketches, .... cause i don't really have the time to sit and work on something like i use to, but thanks for the critique.
     
  8. Adjecyca

    Adjecyca Pup

    I'll post some more "finished" things as well as other sketches in a day or two...
     

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